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How special are you to me?
You’re everything that I need.
Significant to me, I want you to see,
That without you, I can never be…
Satisfied with my life.
Things wouldn’t seem right.
Thinking of you each morning,
Dreaming of you each night.
Missing you always,
Just counting the days…
Wanting to say…
I want to run my hand through your hair,
To treat you like a queen without another care.
I want to whisper sweet things into your ear,
To tell you things from my heart I want you hear.
I want to embrace you in my arms,
To have my love keep you warm.
I want to caress your lips,
To seal our love with a sweet kiss.
I want to bug you like I did ten years ago,
But this time, I’m bugging for your love.
Letting you know,
That God sent you to me from up above.
Used to be childhood friends,
Now I want to be with you until eternity’s end.
I asked God for an angel, he brought me to you.
I asked God for true love, but he did nothing. He knew…
That it was you, who would make it come true.

So what makes you so special?
You’re the most important piece to my puzzle.
This poem is dedicated to my girlfriend Amy. Basically we were two childhood friends who haven't seen each other in ten years. Now we're in love with each other.

Out of all the things I've submitted here at devART, this piece means the most for me.
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ScarletRage Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2005
I LUV IT~~~~~~~ITS GREAT
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thorium Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2005
great, so great...
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garfield101 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2003  Hobbyist Digital Artist
great poem you got there dude! 8) (Cool)
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dan-hibiki Featured By Owner May 30, 2003
Glad that you found your love, kahn of the dragon. ^_~
I hope someday I can find that missing slice to the supreme extra cheese pizza pie ...
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o_O; I guess I should work on my poetry, huh. xP

Your poem is very nice. I can tell it was written with genuine feeling.
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djpreach Featured By Owner May 27, 2003
Truth of the matter is, I know excatly how you feel. i mean there is no other way to put it. I know what you feel. And i know its the best damn feeling in the whole wide world. No $ no treasure, nothin could ever compare or replace that feeling. Yet i know what it feels like to have that feeling riped away from you. and there is no pain quite like it. you would wish for any other kind of pain, dying 100 times, feeling 1,000 bullets, 1,000,000 knives striking you, anything else but that. I wish you both the best of luck and pray that you never feel this pain. Yes i know i may be sounding childish and stupid to some, but if you only felt what i feel. Then you would really and trully understand. Excellent work, and its good to see something from you once more, lets hope there is more to be seen. Nod
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simba Featured By Owner May 26, 2003
Wow. Powerful piece. All the best my friend. :) (Smile)
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spritefic Featured By Owner May 25, 2003
very cool - nice and touching :) (Smile)

way to go dude
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foshizzle383 Featured By Owner May 24, 2003
hey what the fuck are you doing on the net?

nice poem dude :) (Smile)
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lunareklipze Featured By Owner May 24, 2003  Student Photographer
Quite emotional, nicely done indeed :D (Big Grin)
Wish the best for you two!

Laterz
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crunch Featured By Owner May 24, 2003
wow man. this is very nice. i think its great that you found someone you're in love with. because i am in love with someone myself. its a great feeling :) (Smile)

im gonna fav this :D (Big Grin)
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zato-2two Featured By Owner May 24, 2003
DK !!! He lives !!!! OMG

It looks like an easy-going ballad to me...I can hear the beat going in my head already...Smells Like Teen Spirit . Nice job ! w00t!

Million praises to our king !!! Worship
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spane Featured By Owner May 23, 2003
Aww look, our little dk is writing poetry.

Hoo hoo hoo. :P (Lick)
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remiks Featured By Owner May 23, 2003
how sweet...very expressive...

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